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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.

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in several countries,
people
 still struggled with medication bills. as
people
 know healthcare is expensive ,
however
,
people
 can maintain their
health
 by preventing diseases.
nevertheless
, government
health
 funding is limited.
thus
, those civilises have the responsibilities to pay for their healthcare if they can afford it. in recent years, many
people
 regardless of their
health
such
 as, consistently consume eating unhealthy foods
also
 alcohol,
this
 give a substantial impact on their
health
 and reducing immune
thus
, the risk leads to diseases. prevention is better than cure.
moreover
, plenty of
people
 have their owner's insurance to secure their
health
, the benefit of
this
 is if their get ill
health
, insurance services will cover their medical bills,
nevertheless
 governments should spend the funds carefully and uses them for
people
 who really cannot afford
health
 insurance. in summary, maintaining our
health
 is a priority and we should pay for our
health
 care.
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