In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
However
, with an increase in financial problems in some countries
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,countries
people
may have to travel
to their own countries
in the future but I disagree with this
opinion and I think people
are finding new ways to make it cheaper.
Although
advertisement has some negative effects , it has some positive effects on customers. Firstly
it makes competition between companies and they have to do better to gain more market share thus
sometimes they give a great discount on their services and products for
instance, in our Add the comma(s)
,for
country
there is a lot of excursion agency which give the best services so Add a comma
,country
people
have a variety of options to select between them and in this
occasions company have to give a better option or discount to give more customer so I think it would be helpful for people
to have a cheaper trip . Secondly
, I think people
adapt themselves to the situation so if they can not afford to travel
by plane they may find another transportation like a ship or bus for their trip for
example , some Add the comma(s)
,for
people
in my country
have a foreign trip by car they go to Turkey or Armenia by their car or a bus and also
for the last
World Cup they travel
to Qatar by ship thus
I think the future is not an exception . Finally
, with improvement in technology people
are becoming more knowledgeable therefore
they like to travel
to other countries
to learn about new cultures and taste new foods .
On the other hand
, for some situations like diseases people
have to travel
to their country
such
as during corona pandemic, people
have to travel
to their country
because they were not allowed to travel
to other countries
. Moreover
, with improvements in technology and social -media, it may happen some people
think it is not important to go to other countries
when they have great videos and pictures of their beautiful places .
In conclusion , however
we have 4k videos and high-quality pictures but I think going to Add a comma
,however
travel
makes great sense.Submitted by Nedjoo on
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