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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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 , with an increase in financial problems in some
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countries
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people
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 may have to
travel
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 to their own
countries
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 in the future but I disagree with
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 opinion and I think
people
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 are finding new ways to make it cheaper.
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 advertisement has some negative effects , it has some positive effects on customers.
Firstly
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 it makes competition between companies and they have to do better to gain more market share
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 sometimes they give a great discount on their services and products
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for
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 instance, in our
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country
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 there is a lot of excursion agency which give the best services so
people
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 have a variety of options to select between them and in
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 occasions company have to give a better option or discount to give more customer so I think it would be helpful for
people
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 to have a cheaper trip .
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 , I think
people
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 adapt themselves to the situation so if they can not afford to
travel
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 by plane they may find another transportation like a ship or bus for their trip
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 example , some
people
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 in my
country
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 have a foreign trip by car they go to Turkey or Armenia by their car or a bus and
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 for the
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 World Cup they
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 to Qatar by ship
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 I think the future is not an exception .
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 , with improvement in technology
people
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 are becoming more knowledgeable
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 they like to
travel
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 to other
countries
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 to learn about new cultures and taste new foods .
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 , for some situations like diseases
people
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 have to
travel
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 to their
country
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such
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 as during corona pandemic,
people
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 have to
travel
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 to their
country
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 because they were not allowed to
travel
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 to other
countries
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.
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 , with improvements in technology and social -media, it may happen some
people
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 think it is not important to go to other
countries
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 when they have great videos and pictures of their beautiful places . In conclusion ,
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however
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 we have 4k videos and high-quality pictures but I think going to
travel
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 makes great sense.
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