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Some people believe online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas other believe that only printed material shoul be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It certainly cannot be denied that in
this
 modernization people have an excess of online material that they easily found on the internet and it is not rocket science for people to utilize
this
 while some people think that only printed material should use for a child's learning process. In the forthcoming ,encounter I will represent both these views and give an appropriate conclusion to
this
 essay. Nowadays,
online
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 platform is common among the public and other sectors due to their flexibility and availability everywhere.
Therefore
, more and more schools apply internet material
such
 as books, notes and so on.
Moreover
, online things are cheaper than printed material and
also
 not only attract juveniles with their colourful pictorial description but
also
 is an appropriate method for teaching beginners.
This
 creates their interest in studying.
Furthermore
, it has benefits either saving trees and not polluting the environment. Moving the flip side,
this
 has some drawbacks as well, location barrier is one of the most ones because some places have no internet connection so it is not available there.
In addition
 to
this
, children do not make real connections with online material but they use
paper
 easily and use it according to their physical condition. Above and beyond
this
, the
paper
 material is a too ancient and reliable source. In my word, I mostly preferred online materials due to their many advantages, easy to carry as well as not being much more costly than
paper
 statements. In conclusion,
although
 online study material is quite popular these days
paper
 records are still popular among students and they prefer to read and check offline because no disturbance while studying and they feel reserved.
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