In the developed world avarage life expectancy is increasing in modern life. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging-population. What problem will this causefor individuals and society.
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Modern nations have advanced due to enhanced technologies and because of
this
, life expectancy has amplified and people are experiencing their
longer life. Correct pronoun usage
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However
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change
in Fix the agreement mistake
changes
life
cycle of human beings, Add an article
the life
it
has drastically affected countries' Correct pronoun usage
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population
. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Therefore
, Government
should implement such
actions to tackle population
in order to manage everything smoothly. Correct article usage
the population
Otherwise
, those days won't be long when
citizens’ will not have places to live.
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before
To begin
with, Government
should execute such
steps which would decrease the aging
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ageing
population
. The first
and foremost measure the Government
could implement is to minimise the birth of the
children in a family or in simple words, to educate the young generation about family planning Correct article usage
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program
. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
Further
, officials can inform their community about negative
impacts would have because of Correct article usage
the negative
increasing
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the increasing
population
. Moreover
, Government
can levy Add an article
a tax
tax
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taxes
of
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on
expensive
treatment which could permit Add an article
an expensive
the
individuals to live longer.
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apply
However
, if the aging
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ageing
population
won’t be
dealt with, Unnecessary verb
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then
there would be serious consequences. One of the biggest concerns would be unemployment. Further
, if people would live longer, then
, old workers won’t leave their jobs and youngster will not get opportunity
to do the job. Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
In addition
, there would be increase
in Add an article
an increase
demand
and supply of food products which could hamper the economy of the country. Correct article usage
the demand
Lastly
, people who are seeking new
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a new
home
for their families wouldn’t be able to afford housing due to Fix the agreement mistake
homes
non availability
of land.
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non-availability
such
issues, Government
can play paramount
role to control Add an article
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the paramount
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the aging
aging
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ageing
population
by implementing such
policies by spreading awareness about family planning or tax on treatments.Submitted by mkmoneypreet02 on
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