You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

#university #ceremony #invitation #parents #studies #event #time #date #dress #code #tickets

Hi, mom and dad. As you might know, I am about to finish my study at university. So, I thought I'd just drop you a quick line to see if you'll be available to come to my graduating ceremony on the

second

Friday of

month. To be honest, studying in the final year was an arduous process, with

such

a tight curriculum and so many deadlines to handle.

This

semester, I took five courses including Financial accounting, Management accounting, taxation, Investment and Financial management. I was so happy when found out that I have passed all final exams by the end of

this

term. The ceremony will be held at the main square of the campus, from 9 AM to 12 AM on 12th August.

Besides

, according to the requirements, you'll have to wear a formal suit and dress like other participants. Just let me know if there are any other relatives who would like to come and give me an exact number of participants 3 days earlier. The university allows me to have five tickets excluding me, but I need to apply to the officer in the administration office for getting tickets in advance. So please just inform me once you confirm the number of people. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Bin

Submitted by hbljy123 on Thu Dec 15 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

220 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is argued that the number of unemployed has increased even though they have a high-quality education. This phenomenon can be caused by the lack of job opportunities and also related to the personality skills. This essay will explain two main reasons as well as its solutions.
6
band
In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
smoking is becoming a trend among people. In developed nations, it is declared illegal to smoke in coward places. However, one segment of people thinks that it should be totally banned the smoking. The main agenda of this impending composition is to elaborate not only the agreement of the assertion but also the disagreement along with a rational view of how the favour of this notion surpasses the disfavour. To begin with, smoking in public causes different types of diseases among the person. An individual finds it hard to breathe and it will create lung or heart issues in them. For instance, if a human is smoking in front of a non-smoker person who is enable to breathe in front of the smoking person, it may lead to heartache or dizziness in that person. Hence, it has a harmful effect on the passive individual. on the contrary, if it is banned then it becomes a grave concern for the company who is manufacturing the product. Moreover, cigarettes vanishing in thin air becomes an issue ...
6
band
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In contemporary society, the incidence of children being absorbed in electronic devices hovers at a high level. There are various reasons attributed to it, and I definitely contend that this issue has numerous disadvantages.
5.5
band
As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays more and more people use the internet to find information and news updates. Replacing the old school newspapers with modern day technology and unsinging the internet. This in my opinion, is a great use of technology and can have great benefits to everyone, it is faster and it can give more accurate information.
6.5
band
Some people say that Reading books improves imagination of people and improves their language skills while others say watching TV helps. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
While some people believe that reading books helps to build one's imagination and improve their language. Others argue that watching TV helps to attain such skills. Although it's true that such skills can be obtained while watching TV or reading books, I strongly believe that it depends on the type of learner.

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that Reading books improves imagination of people and improves their language skills while others say watching TV helps. To what extent do you agree or disagree.