As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement؟

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and transport throughout the years has impacted globalization, which some people fear will impact a cultural loss. I partly agree with

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statement which I will discuss in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the internet has been a major contributor to globalization.

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is because nowadays it is easier to get in touch with anyone around the globe, which makes it possible for intercultural relationships.

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, my parents are Brazilian and my wife's parents are Japanese, which resulted in an interracial couple, but we would have never met if it was not for the possibility of interacting with other

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that the internet promotes.

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, I think

communication

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has facilitated relationships around the world.

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, easier access to

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and transport systems folks from other

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can negatively influence our cultural roots. In the

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decades, many people have travelled or emigrated to different places searching for better lives and jobs,

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, cultural interactions have happened.

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is the best reason to explain why

countries

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are losing their cultural identities, and that uncontrollably in the future most

countries

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are just going to be mixed communities.

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,

countries

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as Brazil have always had open doors to most of the

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territory,

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has led to race mixtures throughout history.

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, in the present moment, Brazil is considered a large multicultural country with not one specific culture.

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,

communication

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and transport have largely impacted cultural identity. I partly agree with the statement, even though communications have

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multicultural interactions,

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could lead to original culture loss.