Many
people
believe getting
advice
from
elders
is wiser than that from young individuals. While I understand why suggestions from
elders
seem to be more reliable sometimes, I am still of the notion that
advice
from the young would be of greater value in today's world.
Admittedly, when asking for the opinion of senior
people
, we are
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wisdom and experience of them. Having worked and lived for several decades,
elders
can provide abundant experience, tips and methods of both working and living.
This
precious information can help youngsters take
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short-cut and avoid unwanted troubles when dealing with problems.
However
,
advice
from senior members is not always better, especially in modern society where
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technology and
people
's concepts are constantly developing.
There is ample evidence that young
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related to emotional concerns. The reason behind
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generations.
For example
, many
believe finding a lover to get
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by merely just asking, whereas young
people
nowadays have to consider numerous aspects including disparity in cultural, financial and educational backgrounds as well as personality traits, before chasing a boy or a girl.
Therefore
, for
such
issues, young
people
might not be able to acquire useful information from their older relatives or friends.
In addition
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. In fact, it is not unusual to see the use of technological products
such
as tablets, smartphones or gaming controllers have been out of the reach of
people
aged over 70, not to mention advanced knowledge
such
as IT
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or coding.
Thus
, it would be better for the young to search for help from their peers if having some questions regarding
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prevailing knowledge.
In conclusion,
although
it is true that
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better than that from young ones due to their accumulated experience, the young generation can
also
provide valuable suggestions that
elders
may fail to give.
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fact should not be overlooked.