Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

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Dear Sir, My husband is called by his company to work in California along with his family including me and our twelve-year-old boy.

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, before we come here, I would like to inquire if your school can give admission to my son.

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, could you possibly tell me if there are any admission criteria

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as an entrance exam for getting into the school? Our son is a very ingenious and brainy boy. He is great at mathematics and physics as they are his favourite subjects.

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, he is not only good at studies but

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has a keen interest in extra-curricular activities.

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, he has been the captain of a basketball team of juveniles in his previous school. He has been awarded the "Student Of The Year" title

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year for his amazing academic and sports performances. I assure you he will prove himself to be a very diligent student of your institution. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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