You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Papa and Mama, I am writing
this
letter to invite you to witness my graduation ceremony. You will be excited to hear that I have successfully done my bachelor's degree in Electrical Engineering and my university has arranged a convocation
next
month to award degrees to all the graduates. I eagerly want you to be with me to enjoy
this
memorable occasion,
therefore
I am telling you some brief details of the ceremony. The date of the event is the 25th of December, which will be commenced with the recitation of the Quran early in the Morning at around 8 a.m. and followed by a motivational speech from the chancellor of the university.
Although
there is no policy for dress code, it would be preferable to wear formal clothing. Despite the fact that I wish to invite all of my family members but the university has not allowed me to have more than two people excluding me.
Therefore
, I decided to invite both papa and mama since you are my
first
priority of course. I look forward to seeing you both with me on my graduation day. Best wishes, Arsalan Farooq
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