The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The
information
, which is provided by the media
, is a relevant topic in our modern society. One group of people
believe that social media
should provide more reports, which contain good news. Another part of people
suppose
that the reports ought to be different, not only positive.
On the one hand, positive topics in the newspaper could make our society happier, because the material we read has a strong impact on our mood. Satisfied Change the verb form
supposes
people
could make our world better. In this
case, the media
has a significant influence on us and could be used in different ways.Furthermore
, the surrounding of contemporary individuals is so depressive, so the media
might help with it and give readers more positive topics.
On the other hand
, the main purpose of the media
is providing
actual and useful Change the verb form
to provide
information
to readers, so it is not so important whether this
information
is positive or not. Our world is not only about positive things, but it also
contains unbelievably dramatic stories, which the media
should provide to the readers. For instance
, terror acts such
as explosions in the metro,
must be provided by journalists, because it is Remove the comma
apply
type
of Add an article
a type
the type
information
, which all people
should know.
To sum up, from
my opinion the main purpose of the Change preposition
in
media
to
provide relevant and useful Add a missing verb
is to
information
even if it is depressive ones
Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as terror
acts.Replace the word
terrorist
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