The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The
information
, which is provided by the
media
, is a relevant topic in our modern society. One group of
people
believe that social
media
should provide more reports, which contain good news. Another part of
people
suppose
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that the reports ought to be different, not only positive. On the one hand, positive topics in the newspaper could make our society happier, because the material we read has a strong impact on our mood. Satisfied
people
could make our world better. In
this
case, the
media
has a significant influence on us and could be used in different ways.
Furthermore
, the surrounding of contemporary individuals is so depressive, so the
media
might help with it and give readers more positive topics.
On the other hand
, the main purpose of the
media
is
providing
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actual and useful
information
to readers, so it is not so important whether
this
information
is positive or not. Our world is not only about positive things, but it
also
contains unbelievably dramatic stories, which the
media
should provide to the readers.
For instance
, terror acts
such
as explosions in the metro
,
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must be provided by journalists, because it is
type
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of
information
, which all
people
should know. To sum up,
from
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my opinion the main purpose of the
media
to
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provide relevant and useful
information
even if it is depressive
ones
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apply
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such
as
terror
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acts.
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