Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you regarding the advertisement published in the local newspaper

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Wednesday. The article was written to request people to participate in environmental-friendly events.

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of all, I would like to inform you that volunteering has been one of my biggest passions

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since I was a child. One of the projects I have directly followed was related to collecting garbage in the parks surrounding the metropolitan city of Rome and along the roads

to the river.

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, I would be very interested to be involved in

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initiatives, if they are available in the program. As an experienced person, I would like to lead

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team and choose which are the most affected parts of the city, that would require immediate attention.

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, I would like to organize monthly meetings for newbies and to

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how passion and dedication are extremely important in these kinds of activities. Yours faithfully, Andrea Klein

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