Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you regarding the advertisement published in the local newspaper

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Wednesday. The article was written to request people to participate in environmental-friendly events.

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of all, I would like to inform you that volunteering has been one of my biggest passions

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since I was a child. One of the projects I have directly followed was related to collecting garbage in the parks surrounding the metropolitan city of Rome and along the roads

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to the river.

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, I would be very interested to be involved in

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initiatives, if they are available in the program. As an experienced person, I would like to lead

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team and choose which are the most affected parts of the city, that would require immediate attention.

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, I would like to organize monthly meetings for newbies and to

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how passion and dedication are extremely important in these kinds of activities. Yours faithfully, Andrea Klein

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Dec 15, 2022

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