Business and Money In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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argument
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on two
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, some
people
earn
a huge
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huge salaries
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salaries
. Some
individual
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individuals
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think that make
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a benefit
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for
thecountry
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the country
,
whlies
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while
some
people
think the
goverment
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government
should have rules to limit
employee's
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employees'
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salaries
.
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discuss both
viwe
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views
view
and give my
openion
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opinion
below the paragraphs.
To begin
, a person who can work hard,
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earn
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earns
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a lot of money in order to improve their
lifstlye
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lifestyle
qualities.
Moreover
, the
government
economy-level
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economy level
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will
be develop
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by
people
who earn high
salaries
.
For example
, Rich
people
build companies
to
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poverty
people
.
Also
, that can change poor
people
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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as well. In
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addition
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,
government
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the government
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should be given citizens
a
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free education and standard health care.
On the other hand
, the
government
can
be
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limit
people
's
salaries
while
people
are not work
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hard.
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Furthermore
,
people
who can not work
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the
government
sector, moved to the private
sectors
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sector
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.
For instance
,
doctor
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doctors
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,
engeneer
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engineers
,
teacher
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teachers
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and moved to the private
sectors
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sector
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.
Besides
, the
goverment
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government
has faced a lot of
problem
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problems
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. To sum up,
people
can earn
a huge
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a huge salary
huge salaries
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salaries
because it
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an
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to
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the country. In my opinion,
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
will be found
the
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apply
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taxed from
people
who earn a lot of money.
Similarly
, the ministry will start companies and factories as well as give
the
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job to poor
people
.
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