Business and Money In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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argument
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side
, some Change to a plural noun
sides
people
earn Use synonyms
a huge
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huge salaries
a huge salary
salaries
. Some Use synonyms
individual
think that make Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
benefit
for Add an article
a benefit
thecountry
, Correct your spelling
the country
whlies
some Correct your spelling
while
people
think the Use synonyms
goverment
should have rules to limit Correct your spelling
government
employee's
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employees'
salaries
. Use synonyms
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and give my Correct your spelling
views
view
openion
below the paragraphs.
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opinion
To begin
, a person who can work hard, Linking Words
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and earn
earn
a lot of money in order to improve their Correct subject-verb agreement
earns
lifstlye
qualities. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Moreover
, the Linking Words
government
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economy-level
will Correct your spelling
economy level
be develop
by Change the verb form
be developed
people
who earn high Use synonyms
salaries
. Use synonyms
For example
, Rich Linking Words
people
build companies Use synonyms
to
poverty Change preposition
for
people
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Also
, that can change poor Linking Words
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people
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people's
lifestyle
as well. In Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
addiction
, Correct your spelling
addition
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government
should be given citizens Add an article
the government
a
free education and standard health care.
Remove the article
apply
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
government
can Use synonyms
be
limit Unnecessary verb
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people
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salaries
while Use synonyms
people
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are not work
hard. Change the verb form
are not working
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Furthermore
people
who can not work Use synonyms
at
the Change preposition
in
government
sector, moved to the private Use synonyms
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
For instance
, Linking Words
doctor
, Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
engeneer
, Correct your spelling
engineers
teacher
and moved to the private Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
Besides
, the Linking Words
goverment
has faced a lot of Correct your spelling
government
problem
.
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problems
people
can earn Use synonyms
a huge
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a huge salary
huge salaries
salaries
because it Use synonyms
have
an Change the verb form
has
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effect
to
the country. In my opinion, Change preposition
on
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the goverment
goverment
will be found Correct your spelling
government
the
taxed from Correct article usage
apply
people
who earn a lot of money. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the ministry will start companies and factories as well as give Linking Words
the
job to poor Correct article usage
apply
people
.Use synonyms
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