Write about the following topic. More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

As J. Robert Oppenheimer once said, “in material

science

, these are and have been, and are most surely likely to continue to be heroic days.” Every day we are witnessing our daily progress in different

areas

from augmented reality to the James Webb telescope. Material

science

has the main role in

this

raising improvement since all other

areas

have to consider material-related conservation in order to make the innovation happen;

however

, my

country

, Iran is not progressing as it should be. I choose to study material

science

and engineering as my major in

university

because I had a great passion for Formula 1 as a kid, and I used to dream about becoming a Formula 1 engineer. I have realized the remarkable progress in

this

area due to the evolution of material

science

over time.

However

, Formula 1 was not the only field that was affected by the progress of material.

In addition

, my

country

has many serious issues in industrial

areas

such

as the car industry as well which are more crucial for me. After completing high school with a score of 19.77 from 20, I ranked 3343th among more than 300,000 participants in the nationwide

university

entrance exam.

Consequently

, I was accepted to study material

science

and engineering at the

University

of Tehran which is regarded as the most prestigious

university

in our

country

.

Furthermore

, the

University

of Tehran is one of the greatest education institutes in Iran in engineering fields with a rank of 70th, and the material department with a rank of 126th according to the NTU ranking in 2021. My main goal to choose the

University

of Drexel to

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in is due to its rich background in mechanical engineering, especially fracture and fatigue, material characterization and advanced manufacturing. I am looking forward to getting a research assistant position at the

university

of Drexel because I wish to publish more specific papers in material

science

in these related

areas

. To commence

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, I have worked in the hot deformation and thermomechanical processing laboratory as a research assistant for 2 years and I was fortunate to be educated in fatigue and additive manufacturing studies especially due to my well-educated graduate colleagues.

Moreover

, I have worked with various machines

such

as tensile

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, friction stir processing, and wire cut machines, and I have compatible knowledge of advanced characterizations

such

as EBSD and TEM. After 2 years of investigating, I submitted my

first

ISI paper “The Effect Of Heat Treatments On The Room And

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Mechanical Properties Of Alsi10mg Alloy Fabricated By Selective Laser Melting” in the journal of material research and technology with an impact factor of 6.2.

Therefore

, I find myself qualified for the

Ph.D.

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program of the mechanical department of

this

university

.

Additionally

, I have plans to establish a private hi-tech company in my

country

after my graduation in order to gather qualified scientists to overcome industrial issues related to the material

science

of our homeland.