Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.

Nowadays, pursuing a master's degree or studying for a degree at a
university
abroad has become a dream for everyone. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
This
essay will discuss, both sides of the coin. There are many factors which are driving people's interest in studying abroad.
Firstly
, Most families might consider it would heighten their reputation if their children are studying abroad.
secondly
, it can be the student's interest in getting to know the education system, learning approach and culture in foreign countries.
For example
, my friend Mr Klaus went to the UK to pursue a master's at oxford
university
, he dreamt of studying at the
university
from a young age, and he struggled and worked hard to get into the
university
and gain a degree from that
university
. On the other side, studying abroad holds a bunch of disadvantages.
Firstly
, it never ends with studying, after the study they wanted to earn a job, after a certain time in their job, most of the students wanted to settle abroad as they will be comforted with their jobs, and quality of life and would look for the permanent ways to settle in abroad.
For example
, my cousin Alex never returned
home
permanently and only comes to visit their
home
country once in a while after pursuing his masters in the UK.
Although
settling broad is a personal decision of the student, it would affect the
home
country as most of the intelligent students are flying away Considering, all the pros and cons. Fulfilling dreams is important but studying abroad can be encouraged only when students wanted to come back and execute the procedures of their learning in their
home
country.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic excellence
  • career prospects
  • cultural exposure
  • global perspective
  • networking opportunities
  • personal growth
  • financial burden
  • tuition fees
  • living expenses
  • travel costs
  • homesickness
  • cultural shock
  • personal well-being
  • recognition of degrees
  • academic terminology
  • communication nuances
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