Nowadays young generations
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mostly like to take risks, both
theirChange preposition
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and their personal lives. It affects
people
in many ways. In my opinion, I
that the of taking
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outweigh the drawbacks.
However
, In
this
iChange the capitalization
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will explore both aspects and
give my own opinion.
On the
one
hand, critics may
that,
one
of the significant drawbacks of taking
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is
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theCorrect your spelling
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people
their things easily.
For example
, there is a
people
, who work
at Change preposition
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veryAdd an article
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stressful
jobFix the agreement mistake
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. But he got
goodCorrect article usage
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salary from that
job
. But he found another
job
in another company.
This
company promised him
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gaveChange the form of the verb
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goodCorrect article usage
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salary and
lessCorrect quantifier usage
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working hours. So he moved from that
job
. But
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time later the company was closed. He losted hos
job
even. If he did not
movedChange the verb form
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his
job
he does not want to face
this
situation.
,
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young
like to play
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game
toChange preposition
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money
. So sometimes they spent
lotChange the article
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of
money
fromChange preposition
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those
gameFix the agreement mistake
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.
Then
lost their
money
a Change preposition
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little amount
of Change preposition
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time.
Such
as
CasinoFix the agreement mistake
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, bet for the games. Sometimes it affects
from Change preposition
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people
's mental stress.
On the other hand
, there are
numberChange the article
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of arguments
favourChange preposition
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of my stance.
One
of the most preponderant
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is that
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someChange preposition
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moments
people
can
gotChange the verb form
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more benefits for
stanceCorrect pronoun usage
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.
People
who won a lottery ticket. So he has a lot of
money
. So he can invest that
money
as a fixed deposit in the bank
eitherCorrect word choice
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he can buy properties or gold.
Therefore
he can save that
money
.
Moreover
value of those
money
time.
is
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investReplace the word
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for his future.
Taking
risk
affectAdd the particle
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people
in various ways. Sometimes
has good
and sometimes bad
.
However
, in
argumentCorrect article usage
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outlined above,
one
can conclude that despite having some drawbacks the benefits of taking
riskFix the agreement mistake
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had more positive
in
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society.