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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
#maps #university #sports #courts
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The
map
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 below illustrates university
sport
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courts
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 in 1990 and after reconstruction. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, the changes include
new
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a new
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 building on the right side of the
map
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. The amount of tennis
courts
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 increased and moved to the left part of the
map
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. A basketball court was built on the site of the park on the left side of the
map
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. Under
basketball
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the basketball
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 court car park was reconstructed into tennis
courts
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. On the right side of the
map
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 was built a mall. Café, indoor pool and reception remained the same.
Changing
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 room was replaced
to
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in
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 the centre of
a
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the
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 building.There was a change at bottom of the
map
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fitness
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the fitness
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 centre was built on the site of
tennis
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the tennis
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courts
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, courts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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