Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education is
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one of the fundamental human rights for
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children in order to succeed in professional life.
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, to make
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career
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field, primary schooling is mandatory to familiarize core concepts. It is agreed that learning should be provided to everyone without any cost regardless of their income. Analysing why tutoring should not be considered
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leisure
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activity but
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freedom, as well as why it should not be charged heavily will be discussed with appropriate instances.
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with, attaining primary
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from
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school is
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and most important requirement for
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beginners to achieve in
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field.
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, it is widely known that Delhi Government in India has launched some schools in order to promote
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schooling among underprivileged people and learning styles are very similar to
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institution
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. Gladly,
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led Indian parents to send their children to school.
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it has proved that it’s
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right to possess
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skills by going
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universities
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.
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, elementary and secondary education should be provided free of charge by the state ministers for the learners to gain some skills because parents would have to bear college costs and training costs which could be very expensive.
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, engineering and
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studies in Sydney’s universities are quite pricey and it is not for every parent to afford it.
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is the source for scholars to lead their life in
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manner.
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, it becomes apparent that schools and universities shouldn’t ask
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parents and guardians to pay for their children’s tuition. To summarise, schooling should be considered
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primary
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human right. It is agreed that expenditures of learning should not be levied regardless of parents’ income.
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of running schools without any costs would be beneficial for the pupils.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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