You live near a recreation ground. A local school often brings pupils to the recreation ground to do sports, such as football and cricket, but recently this has caused some problems. Write a letter to the head of the school. In your letter: explain why you enjoy living by the recreation ground describe the recent problems at the recreation ground say what you think the school should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been a resident of the community for the past three years.
Although
I understand the need for your students to use the recreation
ground, some problems boring me and my neighbors
, which is why I am writing Change the spelling
neighbours
this
letter.
I live next
to the recreation
ground, and I often take my son to play on the slide in
there. Change preposition
apply
Besides
, I also
contact our neighbors
to go for a walk with our kids together.
Before, your students were doing some sports and athletics without any Change the spelling
neighbours
equipments
. But, your classes have held much more ball games recently, which Correct your spelling
equipment
increase
the various risks for our residents. Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
For example
, your student kicked the ball to my son in this
recreation
last
week, fortunately, he has just got a little bump on his forehead.
I thought I should draw your attention to the situation. We all don't hope that anyone will be hurt. Maybe it could provide more capacious space in
your campus for doing ball sports. Your students Change preposition
on
also
could use this
recreation
ground to do other safety
physical activities.
Again, I am all for student fun, but it should not be something that regularly disturbs residents.I hope you will consider my advice Replace the word
safe
favorably
.
Sincerely yours,
JoannaChange the spelling
favourably
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