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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the history of their own country than other countries.Do you agree or disagree?

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 I said that I do not agree with them, It doesn't mean that I think that children should not learn about their past, because I really love the past of Japan, but when I started to learn about the past of our country I started to love 2 past types, It's the past of Uzbekistan and past of Japan. Every past has really interesting places like Napoleon. He was a really good king. He conquered many territories.
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, if children know their past and others' histories like the past of the USA or Italy, they can be really good people that can tell interesting facts about some countries. I have a good friend, he's really interested in the history of Germany, and when I ask him something, I can hear so many facts about Germany. So, in the end, I want to say that, the history of your country is important, but if you know the history of other countries It'll be better. Thanks for your attention.
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