Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Due to the personality differences between people, some individuals choose the monotonous lifestyle, performing some tasks repeatedly
thus
they are unwilling to change
while others are of adventurous nature and always likes
Wrong verb form
like
change
in their lives. The essay will discuss both sides of view before I present my own opinion.
On the one hand, people have a plethora of reasons to justify their demeanour towards innovation and some will be presented. Firstly
, they are reluctant to change
because it is scary for them and these humans cannot adjust themselves in
some modified living style which is far different from their routine, Change preposition
to
for example
, employees are scared from
new Change preposition
of
employer
because of the uncertainty of Fix the agreement mistake
employers
his
behaviour towards Correct pronoun usage
their
his
subordinates. Correct pronoun usage
their
Secondly
, these citizens have low confidence and they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
pessimist
about new challenges Fix the agreement mistake
pessimists
of
Change preposition
in
life
thus
they use avoidant strategies rather than facing them, like, my uncle always try
to put his new assignments on his colleagues because of low self-confidence because he thinks he will make mistakes in it.
Correct subject-verb agreement
tries
On the contrary
, persons who adapt to the changing circumstances in their life
have many benefits. To begin
with, it give
them more exposure as they transform themselves according to the situation and Change the verb form
gives
also
get worthwhile experiences, to instantiate, government service employees are transferred from one city to other
, corresponding to their job requirements and they get diversity from the cultures of these cities in which they stay. Correct pronoun usage
another
Moreover
, it give
them more confidence and courage to tackle Change the verb form
gives
with
any problem in their Change preposition
apply
life
. Furthermore
, they feel obliged to get a
relief from their tedious routines because Remove the article
apply
there
citizens get depressed from living in Replace the word
their
a
same boring state for Correct article usage
the
long
time. Change the article
a long
For example
, many natives travel to other tourist destinations for holidays just to escape themselves
from their dull schedules.
In conclusion, it will not be gainsaid that there are valid arguments on both Correct pronoun usage
apply
side
of the opinion. Change to a plural noun
sides
However
, I believe that change
is compulsory for a happy and satisfied life
, also
a
main ingredient for success.Change the article
the
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