Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Due to the personality differences between people, some individuals choose the monotonous lifestyle, performing some tasks repeatedly
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while others are of adventurous nature and always
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in their lives. The essay will discuss both sides of view before I present my own opinion. On the one hand, people have a plethora of reasons to justify their demeanour towards innovation and some will be presented.
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, they are reluctant to
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because it is scary for them and these humans cannot adjust themselves
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some modified living style which is far different from their routine,
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, employees are scared
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because of the uncertainty of
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behaviour towards
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subordinates.
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, these citizens have low confidence and
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are
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about new challenges
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life
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they use avoidant strategies rather than facing them, like, my uncle always
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to put his new assignments on his colleagues because of low self-confidence because he thinks he will make mistakes in it.
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, persons who adapt to the changing circumstances in their
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have many benefits.
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them more exposure as they transform themselves according to the situation and
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get worthwhile experiences, to instantiate, government service employees are transferred from one city to
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, corresponding to their job requirements and they get diversity from the cultures of these cities in which they stay.
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, it
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them more confidence and courage to tackle
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any problem in their
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.
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, they feel obliged to get
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relief from their tedious routines because
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citizens get depressed from living in
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same boring state for
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time.
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, many natives travel to other tourist destinations for holidays just to escape
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from their dull schedules. In conclusion, it will not be gainsaid that there are valid arguments on both
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of the opinion.
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, I believe that
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is compulsory for a happy and satisfied
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,
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main ingredient for success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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