The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do.

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Dear Sir, I writing

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to remind you about an AC in my room which broke three weeks ago and I clearly remember informing you the day when it did. As you know, it is sweltering these days,

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, the temperature even goes up to 35 degrees at noon.

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, it has become very difficult for me to step into my room when I get back from work. In my previous letter, I vividly informed you about

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situation and you promised me you would do something about it as soon as you would get time.

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, you have disappointed me by not fulfilling your promise. I would appreciate it if you could look into

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matter at your earliest convenience and fix my room's AC so that I could spend the rest of my summers in peace and comfort.

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, I would consider moving out to another place. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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