In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reason and provide specific examples to support your answer.

It is true that we live now in a competitive world, especially
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work market, workers now should have social
skills
at the same level of good
qualifications
.
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some people would argue that they both have the same importance, I would say that social
skills
have become increasingly demanded.
To begin
with, fresh graduates who possess high certificates and good
qualifications
,
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must undergo appropriate training to learn soft
skills
and how to be involved in
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market so that they gain a chance and take part in
this
competitive system.
For example
, many companies now set some basic
requirments
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requirements
should any candidate
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,
firstly
, interpersonal
skills
, how to deal with other colleagues and how to treat
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clients.
Secondly
, personal ambition and
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is one of the social
skills
that
makes
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any worker
success
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and move forward in his professional life.
Therefore
, it has become a priority for each worker to possess these social talents.
On the other hand
, good
qualifications
and degrees are not enough nowadays. While these things have significant importance in making anyone ready and eligible to work in any place, these will not make individuals able to be decision-makers or convince any company to hire them.
For instance
, if any giant firm needed to hire a particular employee in a specific vacant place that needs special
skills
, they select from those who possess these particular experiences,
thus
, social
skills
have much more important than
qualifications
. In conclusion, social
skills
and
qualifications
have the same importance, while sometimes having social
skills
is more important
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