Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years,

zoos

have always been a popular destination not only for children but

also

for adults. While some argue that providing a

zoo

in the city could benefit people, I believe there are many ways to get the benefits without having a

zoo

in the city.

Zoos

, according to some, are cruel.

To begin

with, the presence of

Zoos

will lose the freedom of

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well-being. The limited space provided to each creature will limit it to move since

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the natural way to

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food and breed is the open space.

In addition

, it is widely seen that several

Zoos

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collections only provided

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animal which can cause each individual

feeling

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stress

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and lonely. Should the creature live alone for a long time, it will disrupt its habit to reproduce naturally. The main reason

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the

present

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of

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is to prevent extinction become pointless. On the one hand,

zoos

are still a good way of entertainment for some people because of

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education, especially for children. I believe there are various options in order to exchange the role of

zoos

. Most parents’ motivation to bring their

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to the

Zoo

is to introduce them to the

variety

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species

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especially those who are not domestically bred.

As nowadays

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, everything can be sourced through

internet

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, we can alternate it to browse and learn the atlas of animals virtually, be it from written articles or videos from the internet without having the urgency to visit the

Zoo

. In conclusion, some people may consider

zoos

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useful recreational activity;

however

, I am convinced that we can entertain and learn

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many ways, except for those that are harmful to animals.