Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years,
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have always been a popular destination not only for children but
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for adults. While some argue that providing a
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in the city could benefit people, I believe there are many ways to get the benefits without having a
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in the city.
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, according to some, are cruel.
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with, the presence of
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will lose the freedom of
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well-being. The limited space provided to each creature will limit it to move since
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the natural way to
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food and breed is the open space.
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, it is widely seen that several
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Zoos
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collections only provided
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animal which can cause each individual
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stress
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and lonely. Should the creature live alone for a long time, it will disrupt its habit to reproduce naturally. The main reason
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of
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is to prevent extinction become pointless. On the one hand,
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are still a good way of entertainment for some people because of
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education, especially for children. I believe there are various options in order to exchange the role of
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. Most parents’ motivation to bring their
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to the
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is to introduce them to the
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species
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of species
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especially those who are not domestically bred.
As nowadays
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, everything can be sourced through
internet
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, we can alternate it to browse and learn the atlas of animals virtually, be it from written articles or videos from the internet without having the urgency to visit the
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. In conclusion, some people may consider
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useful recreational activity;
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, I am convinced that we can entertain and learn
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many ways, except for those that are harmful to animals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conservation
  • habitat
  • endangered species
  • captive breeding
  • wildlife sanctuary
  • animal welfare
  • educational outreach
  • natural environment
  • ethical dilemma
  • ecotourism
  • species preservation
  • behavioral enrichment
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