Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days

health

is a major concern and in the past few decades

due to

changes in living style and food consumption is drastically changed. Few people

argued

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that it is the medical staff's responsibility to teach

patients

about their

health

.

On the other hand

, few believe that it is the

patients

' self-responsibility to keep themself healthy. I opine that it is doctors’ duty to educate people about their

health

.

This

essay will discuss

this

further

in upcoming paragraphs. First and foremost, medical practitioners are responsible

to spread

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awareness about the

health

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public needs to follow. These days everyone is busy with their hectic schedule and until they get good guidance from a physician they cannot stay healthy.

For example

, A patient is having some

health

issues and

this

is the initial stage, a bad colostral and an unhealthy

diet

is the main culprit for

this

. In

this

scenario, if the medico is not giving the appropriate suggestion and

diet

plan to the patient

this

problem will get

worst

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in a few days.

In addition

to

this

,

health

practitioners get paid for

this

and it is their responsibility to guide

patients

about exercise and strict

diet

plans.

Furthermore

, they need to run a campaign about routine

health

check-ups

so that major diseases can be discovered before it's too late.

Also

, after regular ,

check-ups

doctors need to advise and some restrictions which need to be followed by the suffering person. These are a few examples which can benefit common people and by

following

this

they can stay healthy. In conclusion, it is doctors' duty to advise

patients

and spread knowledge about routine

health

check-ups

and not only

check-ups

they have to suggest a strict

diet

. I totally agree as they are trained for

this

and experienced in patient care.