Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?

Tariffs, a particular type of
taxes
implied on imported consumables, help to keep local farmers of a nation protected from
world
-level competition,
therefore
, I find it required in today's society.
However
,
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those areas
these areas
should be exempted from its execution where starvation is a major issue. It cannot be denied that
such
taxes
are indeed necessary in order to encourage local
food
producers. Undoubtedly, the
world
market is going through a cut-throat competition, and if tariffs are not imposed on international
food
, producers around the
world
are in a position to sell their products in other parts of the country at rather cheap prices, which are likely to have
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adverse ramification on the sale of native produced products. The farmers within a country are able to earn reserved income because of these
taxes
.
For example
, in India, International
food
markets are capable of selling rice
to
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quite
a
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low prices, but tariffs have restricted them to do so. Apart from
this
, countries that are
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victim
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of monsters like starvation should not be included in
this
of
tarrif
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tariff
tariffs
imposed regimes. In simple
words
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such
nations
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tariff
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will allow
world
food
markets to build their business there.
As a
result
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rise in
competitiion
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competition
will make edibles available at reasonable prices and affordable to the inhabitants. Nations like Bhutan and Bangladesh can get rid
from
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of
malnutrishment
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malnourishment
in
this
way. In conclusion,
although
levying
tarrifs
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tariffs
on imported
food
stuff is necessary for
longer
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survival of local farmers of a country, the parts of the
world
suffering from starvation should be allowed to get relief
such
taxes
that
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help the people to take
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atleast
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at least
twice a day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • protective tariffs
  • imported goods
  • local economy
  • buffer
  • volatile global market
  • supply chain
  • sustainable practices
  • local food production
  • environmental impact
  • trade partners
  • cost of living
  • essentials
  • innovation
  • competitiveness
  • reliance
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