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some people think that it is a waste of time for high school student to study literature such as novel or poems.To what extent ddo yu agree or disagree

#people #waste #time #school #student #study #literature #novel #poems #ddo #yu
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 to learn
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the novel
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elders and they don't want to hurt their feeling because they know
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