some people think that it is a waste of time for high school student to study literature such as novel or poems.To what extent ddo yu agree or disagree

A section of society asserted that
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to learn
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novel
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novels
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and
poems
by high
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of time.because
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they believed
students
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graduation l. I completely disagree with
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individuals
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a different viewpoint on
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wasting
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time of
students
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for students
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to learn these things, but it is not true.
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high school-geors learn different
literature
they can learn new word and alao help them to
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enhance
their vocab and
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grammar
. In brief,
literature
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it will
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in future
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because many successful persons said that
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literature
information is
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key to success.
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the novel
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novel
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because
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they believed
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literature
lovel always tells you about moral
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a vital role in life. To be more precise,
literature
novel
always
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their person to their roots. Because
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many
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holds
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about tradition and
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culture
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this
, many
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real
literature
novel
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novels
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.
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,
poems
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literature
also
has a big impact on
students
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poems
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there are feelings about writers, and
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school-goers
like to read
poems
and it is very beneficial for them. Because, when high school
students
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the feelings
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of
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in
poem
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a poem
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.
As a result
, they always respect
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to
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elders and they don't want to hurt their feeling because they know
values
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the values
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of feelings. To conclude, after the discussion,
literature
is very crucial for
students
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of
ther
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their
the
always respect moral
values
and gain precious
knowledge
.
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