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Friends have more impact on the academic performance of students than their teachers do. Do you agree or disagree? Use details and examples to support your opinion.

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In modern society, due to the global pandemic and technological developments, the need for online schooling has been increasing.
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 interactions between
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 and
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, I agree with the statement that
friends
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 have more
influence
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 on
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 success of
students
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 than
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 do. I have several reasons to support my answer.
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 of all, I strongly believe that companions have more
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 on the academic performance of
students
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 than their
teachers
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 do.
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 is because
students
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 spend more time at
school
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 with
friends
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. Throughout
school
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 life, colleagues hang out and talk with their intimates.
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 the time spent on their studies. In some friend groups, helping each other by solving math problems together is common.
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, in some other ones,
students
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 end up
chit -chatting
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 due to distractions.
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, I think that classmates have more
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 on
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school
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grades
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 than
teachers
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 do.
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, there was a scientifically proven study that conversations with companions could have both positive and negative impacts on educational achievements. In
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 study, friend groups that talked about global occurrences and news showed high
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 in their reports.
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, other friend groups that talked about social media and animals were not able to represent great appraisal. There could be a positive impact on
students
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’ assessments in social studies since
friends
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 are capable of broadening
students
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’ horizons and the ways they perceive modern society.
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 some people argue that
teachers
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 are the most vital factor in enhancing
students
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’ academic performance; I suppose that
teachers
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 do not have as much
influence
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 as their companions.
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 is because even if there are amazing
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learnings
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 are more essential.
Students
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 attain upstanding
grades
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 since they
prepared
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 enough in tackling challenging questions during examinations.
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 are ready for tests because they have completed a lot of past papers. What is more, classmates affect
students
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 more because they are able to stimulate each others’ motivations and how much effort they put in
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 To put it in a nutshell, I concur with the statement that classmates could determine the wellness of
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grades
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.
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 is because
friends
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 put in more time
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, help
students
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 store new knowledge, and
motivate
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