Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending in health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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than

treatment

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Governments

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by increasing the budget

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for

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training healthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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and investing

on

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in

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sector will be benefited rather than spending on caring

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curing patients’ people. Investing in

health

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education and public awareness, help to reduce

diseases

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and

saving

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money. Costs of

treatment

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and hospitals are high in most countries,

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,

treatment

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has cost for

governments

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too. Because

governments

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want to equip hospitals with

the

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sophisticated medical technologies and equipment,

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, these tools put a huge burden on the

governments

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, the number of diabetics is increasing, in my country, while

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awareness and education can prevent or keep the speed of incidence of diabetes or heart

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diseases

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disease

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steps toward

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education will help to reduce the cost of

treatment

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and

number

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the number

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of patients in near future. Several

governments

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combat

against

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some

diseases

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as poor sanitation, viruses, and heart

diseases

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. While prevention help to reduce the infection of

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problems

,

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if

governments

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do some actions.

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, some

governments

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can make more parks, gyms and fitness buildings with lower costs rather than making more

health

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centers

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. The more people

do

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exercise, the

less

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fewer

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hearth

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heart

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diseases

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disease

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and diabetes will happen.

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may enable by informing and educating

public

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the public

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about their

health

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, and above all by allocating a portion of

budget

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the budget

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of

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to

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preventive measures to heighten

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public awareness. In conclusion, I agree with increasing the budget for educating people having a healthy lifestyle and doing preventive measures rather than spending on equipping hospitals and

treatment

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