The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

 Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pictures compare the change in
road
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access to a
city
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hospital between the years 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
road
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has become much more modern, with far more facilities. One interesting is that two new
car
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parks were built. In 2007, the public and staff had to use the same parking, which
it
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was inconvenient for both, the old
car
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park
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was opposite a hospital and next to the
City
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road
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. If we look at Hospital
road
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in 2007, there were six bus stops to the west of the
car
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park
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next to
City
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Road
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. In 2010, 6 bus tops were removed,
instead
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, they transformed
it
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into the bus station on the left-hand side of Hospital
road
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. In 2000, there wasn't any roundabout connecting the
city
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hospital to the hospital
road
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, but it was added in 2010. Two
car
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parks were distinguished, one for the public and the other for staff. The public
car
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park
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was in the east of the
city
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hospital,
while
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the staff
car
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park
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was on the right-hand side of
Hospital
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the Hospital
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road
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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