Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is undoubtedly true that different
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species
of
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animals
is
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living in the
forest
.
However
,
destruction
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the destruction
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the
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forest
area
which
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lead
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to many issues. From my
prespective
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perspective
, I tend to stand with the former statement by considering
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several facts.
In
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this
essay, will elaborate
the
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positive aspect of the thread and
thus
lead to a logical conclusion. There are plethora
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to agree with the meritorious side.
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First
and Foremost is that
due to
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overpopulation in the global
area
, destroying the
forest
area
and
constructing
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the building
which
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directly
affecting
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the
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animal's
habitat
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. Another observation related to
this
issue is that most of the raw materials and medicine producing from the tree.
Industry
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will not able to supply
demands
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of the product to the citizens.
Secondly
, Tree is the primary source of
the
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food and shelter for
the
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animals,
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and alot
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alot
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a lot
of
the
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spieces
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species
pieces
will
be die
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which lead to
imbalance
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biodiversity
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in biodiversity
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and
it's became
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it becomes
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crucial to
the
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human's
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life.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
tree
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the tree
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is the natural ability to absorb the
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
from the atmosphere and provide oxygen.To probe more deeply, amazon
providing
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72% of the oxygen level into the air and it's
benefical
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beneficial
to
the
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living creature. Needless to say
that
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, all the merits stand in
a
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good stead. In
recapulation
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recapitulation
, according to the argument aforementioned above the instrumental
are
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is
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indeed
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true
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.Government should
enforcing
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enforce
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the law against the people who
destroying
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destroy
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the
forest
area
.
Consequently
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I'm firmly agree
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to
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the given statement.
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