Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
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concern
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or
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other
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some Correct your spelling
Australia
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islands
there
have tribes, that Correct pronoun usage
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people
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culture
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cultures
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world
language, technology and lifestyle. Then
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discuss
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understand
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society
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with society
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the tribe
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exists
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and that
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. For example
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individual
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individuals
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those used
ancient
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in ancient
tribe
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tribes
people
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the world
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