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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people believe it would be a better opinion that
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a quality guardian must be educated
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college. I completely disagree with
this
 statement because being a good guardian needs some life experience
such
 as multitasking skills and organising skills.
firstly
, all colleges need to provide good academic learning for all students. Because it is really important to become a qualified student when they are completed study at college and university. A
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 person can easily find a career and
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 financially before becoming a parent. The reason behind
this
 point is when they become a parent they need some capital to care
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children
. They have to always look after
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 health, education,
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 to develop
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future
. Those multitask knowledge that could not gain from
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school it is could get from
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day to-day
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 experience. My
second
 point is organization skills are
also
 crucial for becoming a good mother and father. Because they need to feed them well and need supplies education materials and clothes.
Therefore
 we should plan how to arrange those kinds of the regularly.
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 when we feed them too much unhealthy food it is lead them to dangerous
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 in the
future
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 we should well organize
children
's education. we would encourage them to study well and provide good sources. If we could not plan our
children
's
future
 we could not become good guardians. In conclusion, I believed that being a quality guardian always gets experience from daily lifestyle
such
 as good planning
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future
 and completing child's daily needs.
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 can't teach in schools.
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