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For some people, consumer goods have become the most important thing in life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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For some people, consumer goods have become the most important thing in life, in
this
 essay, I'll discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
this
this
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topic. Consumerism has become one of our
modern day
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 of societies, a wide range of people live to consume, regardless of their actual needs, whether they need
this
 item or not, rushed by insane desire
that is
 fed by the massive advertisement industry, using the latest technologies of the artificial intelligence to track the personal
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 to find out what each individual is fond of,
then
 fill his social media accounts and emails with promotions to the items he might be looking for. Well, there are a number of advantages to
consume
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, the
first
 is to feed the natural and necessary needs,
for instance
like
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food,
clothing
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,
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out dated
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 gadgets used in the home. the
second
 thing, the increase in demand will create new jobs and lead to
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 in
the
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salaries. But, looking
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 the downside of
the
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consumerstic
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consumeristic
consumers
behavior
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, we will find its
negetaive
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negative
 impact on human sanity, for
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some, it turned
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 be some sort of addiction, to buy new things just to satisfy the desire to own
this
 type of goods, regardless they will use it or not, chasing the new mobile or new car just because to be the
first
 or the only person who owns it. From my side of the story, I believe consumer goods are the less important things in life, each person, before he pays for anything, to stop and asks himself, do I need it or I'm just falling under some sort of influence?
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 to be alert to the credit cards promotions, pushing the holder of the card to purchase items he doesn't need, just because it's newer or larger.
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