For some people, consumer goods have become the most important thing in life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

For some people, consumer goods have become the most important thing in life, in

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this

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topic. Consumerism has become one of our

modern day

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diseases that affected

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large

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of societies, a wide range of people live to consume, regardless of their actual needs, whether they need

this

item or not, rushed by insane desire

that is

fed by the massive advertisement industry, using the latest technologies of the artificial intelligence to track the personal

behaviors

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to find out what each individual is fond of,

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fill his social media accounts and emails with promotions to the items he might be looking for. Well, there are a number of advantages to

consume

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, the

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is to feed the natural and necessary needs,

for instance

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food,

clothing

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and clothing

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,

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the

out dated

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gadgets used in the home. the

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thing, the increase in demand will create new jobs and lead to

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salaries. But, looking

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the downside of

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consumerstic

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consumeristic

consumers

behavior

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, we will find its

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negative

impact on human sanity, for

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some, it turned

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be some sort of addiction, to buy new things just to satisfy the desire to own

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type of goods, regardless they will use it or not, chasing the new mobile or new car just because to be the

first

or the only person who owns it. From my side of the story, I believe consumer goods are the less important things in life, each person, before he pays for anything, to stop and asks himself, do I need it or I'm just falling under some sort of influence?

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to be alert to the credit cards promotions, pushing the holder of the card to purchase items he doesn't need, just because it's newer or larger.