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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage

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The earth has been changing in recent years and one of the most significant altered is the amount of young and elderly society. While young and teenagers
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 becoming high , a number of the old generation is felling down. In
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 essay , I will discuss what can be benefits and drawbacks that statements from the countries' perspectives.
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 of all , elderly people are the backbone of the countries because they are a heritage to history. Without them , tradition and morals can not carry from generation to generation. In
this
 case , amount of old people ,which is addressed today up to 60s people ,
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 for cultural development and represented
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 attitude. As an example , according to one of the Turkey survey
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, in Turkey , most of the children growing up with their grandparents and compare to Europe , they are more connected with their traditional events , within same survey agent shows that the toddler who grew up with old folk , they are more respectful to
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 population when they are in teen ages.
On the other hand
, considering the economic issues : a number of the young crowd is beneficial to the country's improvements. The world is open hand to technology and artificial intelligence which is developed by fresh brains. The advance of the state is encompassed to the young nations.
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, almost all of the European region has much older folks than the youngest ,
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, most of the states in Europe asked for new graduates or middle age immigrants from
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 countries. Today , still governments
such
 as Germany , France and even UK need to young labour force because they can not find workers. To sum up ,
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 effect on society, a land
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younger ages to develop
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 stages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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