Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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and other areas are advancing, in

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, scientists develop several medicines ,

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, reducing mortality.

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, development in

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helped in many sectors

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existed when they are doing surgery.

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the expert in

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found some vaccines to prevent diseases

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achievement is impactful in societies.

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research produce chemical material and if

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thing is not handled properly the consequences for the environment are hazardous, and can contaminate the land and water.

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some scientists use animals to trial new

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plenty of animals in the lab suffer from pain and Evan died. to sun up, I believe in the future scientists in

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can find more vaccines for other diseases and better medicines with eco-friendly ingredients. not just for humans but

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

207 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

life expectancy
quality of life
vaccines
antibiotics
global connectivity
renewable energy
sustainable future
climate change
online education
knowledgeable and empowered societies
privacy issues
mental health impacts
economic and societal inequalities
environmental degradation
cultural shifts
traditional social structures

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why this might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe bskills and experience are more important. Discuss bot sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.