The continued increase in obesity is the greatest problem faced by developed countries at the present time. What are the causes of this continued increase? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by developed countries today?

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by sitting by the baby’s side and looking if she was comfortable and happy. She used to protect the family from stray dogs. I hope the love and memories of Nora will bring some happiness and comfort to you and the family. She was a gem to your family and bought happiness on every occasion. Everyone will remember the warmth she gave and will never forget her. You are always welcome to meet Snopy and can have a good time together. Your friend always,

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Topic Vocabulary:

obesity
prevalence
sedentary lifestyle
calorie intake
nutrition
balanced diet
economic factors
caloric intake
marketing strategies
genetically predisposed
metabolic rates
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The continued increase in obesity is the greatest problem faced by developed countries at the present time. What are the causes of this continued increase? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by developed countries today?

Fully explain your ideas

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over should the government give access to university education free for all students no matter what financial background they have? I don't partially uphold this idea.

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

scientists and news media are pesenting ever more evidence of climate. Government can not expect to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. give your opinion

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?