Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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life. Some believe that good planning is the key to

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life

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others

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is not possible without hard work or

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. I agree with

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that people have to

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to be successful,

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is not possible without hard

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and with

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with, people who wanted to become a main character in their society.

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, doctors have to work hard on themselves because it is not possible to be a doctor without knowledge.

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, if patients have serious

disease

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, doctors with

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of knowledge never can help them to get rid of

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problem but even worse, be the cause of their death.

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, athletes without hard work and

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can not be the winners of their sports

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, with planning, things could have gone even better because with ideas and

plans

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we can get even more profit.

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, football games couldn't be played without planning every move and strategy, and that's why all football teams need a coach .

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, without planning we can't imagine how directors could have run their firms because it takes responsibility and thinking deeply. In conclusion, I agree that planning would be useful in running corporations and firms but without hard

working

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and with

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it is not possible to make plans real, but just keep it deep inside.