Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is said that there are various
of
ways which Change preposition
apply
leads
to Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
successful
life. Some believe that good planning is the key to Add an article
a successful
successful
life Correct article usage
a successful
while
others debating
that Wrong verb form
debate
this
is not possible without hard work or luck
. I agree with Correct article usage
the statements
statements
that people have to Fix the agreement mistake
statement
planning
l if they Change the verb
plan
wanted
to be successful, Wrong verb form
want
however
, this
is not possible without hard working
and with Replace the word
work
little
bit of Add an article
a little
luck
.
To begin
with, people who wanted to become a main character in their society. For example
, doctors have to work hard on themselves because it is not possible to be a doctor without knowledge. For instance
, if patients have serious disease
, doctors with Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
lack
of knowledge never can help them to get rid of Correct article usage
a lack
this
problem but even worse, be the cause of their death. Moreover
, athletes without hard work and luck
can not be the winners of their sports
On the other hand
, with planning, things could have gone even better because with ideas and plans
we can get even more profit. Add a comma
plans,
For example
, football games couldn't be played without planning every move and strategy, and that's why all football teams need a coach . Therefore
, without planning we can't imagine how directors could have run their firms because it takes responsibility and thinking deeply.
In conclusion, I agree that planning would be useful in running corporations and firms but without hard working
and with Replace the word
work
little
bit of Add an article
a little
luck
it is not possible to make plans real, but just keep it deep inside.Submitted by sherzod5574485 on
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