Task 1 Academic The number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The chart illustrates the

amount

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number

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of tourists visiting a particular island of

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the Carribea

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Carribea

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Caribbean

between 2010 to 2017. The

number

of

visitors

are

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is

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broken down into the

one

who stayed on cruise

ships

and the

one

who stayed on the island. Overall,

number

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the number

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of

visitors

was significantly decreasing

through out

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throughout

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the given time period from only

one

million

in 2010 to 3.5

million

in 2017. The

number

of

visitors

who remained on the

ships

are fluctuating during the

first

three years. it was started out at 0.25 in 2010 and

doubling

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doubled

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to 0.5 the following year. Yet, it was fall back to the exact

number

that it

was

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started in the year

of

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2012. In the

next

years, it tend to increase annually and ended up having 2

million

people visiting the ship in 2017. Meanwhile, the

number

of

visitors

who chose to spend their time on the island was more than the

one

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ones

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who sails on the

ships

in 2010, which

was

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accounted for 0.75

million

. It

then

increasing

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increased

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to

be

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1.5 in 2013 and plateaued until 2015, just before it decreased by 0.25 in 2016.

Finally

, in 2017, it has

less

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fewer

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visitors

than

the

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cruise

ships

, with just 1.5

million

of

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visitors

respectively.