Task 2 Academic In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In
this
modern time where everything almost goes online, printed newspapers or
books
are become
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less purchased since
people
can now read anything they want without having to pay. I would disagree with
this
statement because there are still a lot of
people
who loved physical
books
or newspapers and reading online could lead to distractions in some ways.
Firstly
, printed
books
are much more enjoyable when it comes to
fulfill
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one's reading hobby. The feeling of holding
books
, flipping through
its
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pages, and
smelled
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the paper are a great pleasure for the reader.
Hence
, the cost of a physical book
considered
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to be worth the joy it brings. There are
also
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alternative
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of
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reading
in
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printed papers if one's can not
afford
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, they can borrow
the
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a
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copy from
library
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.
Secondly
,
i
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believe reading online can be less entertaining. The main cause was
because
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that
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the device used for doing the task is
also
the one that
people
use for communicating,
hence
their reading time can be distracted by the incoming notifications. It is
also
a big issue that
people
who
reads
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the screen will experience
a tired eyes
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due to
it's
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light.
Finally
,
i
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I
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personally think that regardless of the easier and
sophisticated
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way of getting information,
people
will still go with printed reading materials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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