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Nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a possitive or negative development?

#people #socialise #face #possitive #development
In
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are
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used to be
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inreplaceable
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irreplaceable
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in
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a
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daily life. So,
popularity
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 of
internet
 communication is increasing each year. In my view, despite
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the sizeable influence? there are some unpleasant options to take into
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consideration. The main reason to think so is that the modern generation has much more problems with health than the previous.
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 of diseases are
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 by professionals in
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last
 decades. People are starting to spend the majority of their time in a sitting position, and live
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lifestyle
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.
As a result
, humanity is attacked with serious diseases and global viruses. Another problem
conserns
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concerns
 identity theft,
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 leads to cases of bullying and stalking. Many
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social
medias’
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 consumers start to overshare private information about themselves.It means that if people continue to do the same, they will be victims of criminals. In fact, in my country cases of persecution using
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location data are common.
Finally
, socialising online
impact
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on
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mental health. As you know, even babies are addicted to the
internet
. And if you evaluate
this
, you will realise that everything is moving towards «critical thinking” Immense amount of students
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 not know how to think adequately and decide something without
internet
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. To conclude,
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 of
internet
 communication has not only advantages
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 but
also
 disadvantages.
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