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Some people think that myth animals are real, some not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Curiosity among human beings has led to a plethora of questions, one among them being the
existence
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 of mythological
animals
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. Whilst some proponents argue that they were real, there are few others who believe
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. In my perspective, the possibility of
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 cannot be ruled out. One of the main reasons for emphasising their
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 is because there are many
animals
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 that are becoming extinct.
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, after a few decades, many
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 that are on the verge of extinction may be classified as a myth.
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, mammoths, which is considered to be a bigger version of present-day elephant, is referred to in stories and are considered to be
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mythological creature.
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, there are scientific instances to prove that these
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 once lived on the earth.
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, the
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 of
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animals
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 cannot be completely ruled out.
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, there are mythological non-human characters which cannot exist and are narrated in stories to make them more interesting.
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, there are
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 which are a blend of a lion and a bird, with superpower capabilities.
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 kind of organism cannot exist, as it does not meet the laws of nature and
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 there is no scientific proof,
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 as fossils to depict its
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.
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, credit for creating
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animals
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 must be given to writers and should be limited to a particular story. To conclude,
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 the
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 of mythical organisms cannot the ruled out completely, I am on the opine that the
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 of organisms must be proved scientifically. People, especially children must be educated about the difference between myth and original
animals
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.
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