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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a ‘gap year’, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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A growing number of people are of the view that having a
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year
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 is a useful approach to
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 for
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future
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 job due to the
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 that it may widen youngsters’ knowledge.
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, there are some who believe that
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 experience does not have any advantages. From my perspective, having a
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 abroad is an amazing opportunity for pupils to grow up which
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plenty of pros which will be outlined in
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 essay below. On the one hand, a
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year
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 is essential for those who have hesitations about a speciality they want to
study
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 for years. As a matter of
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, school graduates are too young to decide what exactly they want to do in the
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 whole life.
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, some of them are likely to meet with burnout and stress due to the
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 that they made a wrong decision about a field of
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. Undeniably, students can
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 just the subjects of their interest along with studying
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 foreign language.
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, having a free
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 to understand the interest in a sphere that a student wants to
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 in the
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 is vital.
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, there are some drawbacks
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 a
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 abroad. In
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, it needs an enormous amount of money to afford a
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year
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. To be more specific, a
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student
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accommodation, food, courses and other things while he/she does not even have a job.
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, when an individual enters the university after having a
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 abroad they meet with
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other economical issues. It is widely known that a student’s life is significantly expensive as well. Undoubtedly, having one
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 abroad can afford only those whose parents are ready to invest in that or those who have a job with a permanent high salary. To conclude, there are some who believe that having a
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year
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 is essential for students to expand their experience. Others suppose that it is an unuseful and expensive approach. I am totally convinced that having a
year
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 abroad is important for school graduates who do not know which field of
study
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 to choose in the
future
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.
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