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Many people use distance learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much attending college or universities. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

#people #distance #program #study #home #benefit #college #universities
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people
peole
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people
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learn
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learn
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programme
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programs
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however
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assume that it can not bring
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profit as much attend to
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 or universities . l think it is more effective
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study
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the pupil
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pupil
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 l will share my personal view Nowadays most people who live in abroad countries
study
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pupils
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lesson
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by
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 professional teachers.
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, they may teach
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in
school
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schools
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 or
unversity
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university
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located
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long
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a long
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 distance from
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the pupiles
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pupiles
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pupils
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also
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another
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 people.
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school
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 so
this
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school
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However
, I prefer to
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afford
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school
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village
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 or small
town
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 has always
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problem
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problems
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of
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internet
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the internet
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 so the
study
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online
do
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 not suitable
them
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 .
For instance
 , when came into the "
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" infection in our country ,
this
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 the air,
all
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 students had to use distance learning
program
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programs
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, the
result
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the education system quality is down .
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 even did not
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instead
 of it they worked, the results
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that
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Uzbekistan do not ready to
study
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anyway
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 l prefer to learn
face- to -face
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. In conclusion , the
study
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more
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better than
other
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way
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 in any situation cause
of
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this
 the teachers can control their
pupils
as well as
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, as well as pupils,
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pupils
 can get
lesson
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 well.
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