Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, there are many large companies which have their business in the
city
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. So, young
people
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have no choice but to leave the rural area and move to urban
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to seek job opportunities and have a better standard of living. And, no one looks after the old
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, and
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is causing them health issues.
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with, many young adults often tend to shift to urban
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once they complete their education. And the most prominent reason for
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is the lack of employment opportunities in rural
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. While urban
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are developed it has a lot to offer like well-paying jobs,
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lifestyle, better education and much more which encourages
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youngsters to leave remote
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and settle in big
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.
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, working with
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bank job, if you work in a big
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, the salary will be from three times to four times higher than in the countryside, but the daily cost of living is just over one and a half times, which makes young
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feel more comfortable living in the
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and especially they can travel everywhere with the remaining money, which is difficult to do if working in other.
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, moving into crowded
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is considered a key factor that might lead
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to global warming. The main reason given to support
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claim is that living in major
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is one of the main contributing factors
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pollution.
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, large urban regions have a lot of public transportation, which is usually associated with an increment in degrees of temperature and ratio of pollution.
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,
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an effect would increase the global warming risk.
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, old folks who don’t want to move to the big
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,
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just want to live where they were born, so their children can only leave them in the countryside where a lack of childcare and a shortage of hospitals will impair the health of the elderly, possibly leading to sensitization for them. In
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conclusion, rural life has gradually lost its popularity over a period of three decades. Youth prefer to live in
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and towns due to attractive opportunities and the trend is resulting in overpopulation as a problem
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and the demise of agriculture.
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, the government can address these problems related to population and agriculture by investing in rural
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young
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have a desire for rural life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • economic opportunities
  • urban areas
  • rural industries
  • cultural heritage
  • overpopulation
  • infrastructure
  • healthcare facilities
  • educational institutions
  • neglect
  • workforce
  • traditional cultures
  • customs
  • pollution
  • support systems
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