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The bar chart provides a comparison of the proportion of
time
 that
parents
 in Australia spent
on
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assisting their
children
 with four activities in 2013. Overall, mothers attended more frequently than
fathers
 in all pursuits.
Moreover
, while
parents
 together spent the highest proportion on playing
games
 with their offspring,
fathers
 liked to help with their
children
's assignments and preparing
clothes
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mothers's
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 favourite preserve Regarding mothers, changing
clothes
 constituted nearly 75%, followed by homework and bed-making, at around 50% and 42% respectively. The lowest
time
 allotted by female
parents
 was playing
games
, at 25%. Concerning
fathers
, the proportion of
fathers
 who assisted their offspring with their school homework was 10%, around 5 times higher than that of choosing
clothes
. Playing
games
 and preparing for bed shared an identical figure, at approximately 4% each.
Finally
, both
parents
 as a team spent 70% of their
time
 playing
games
 with their
children
 whereas the figure for
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time
 activity for their
children
 was 50%. the percentages of
time
 allocated for assignments and changing
clothes
 by both
parents
 were lower, at around 39% and roughly 21%
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