Some peopl suggest that sport helps people learn about teamwork but others say it can encourage people to be too competitive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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the important
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team. Use synonyms
However
, there are some who think that it is Linking Words
too
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one
of the most popular Use synonyms
way
where Change to a plural noun
ways
people
can make a career due to which it is absolutely true that Use synonyms
people
can become more competitive.
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one
hand, those who choose Use synonyms
doing
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to do
sport
as a hobby are likely to learn how to Use synonyms
work
as a team. To be more specific, when there Use synonyms
is
no Change the verb form
are
any
goals to become the best in a field of Correct quantifier usage
apply
sport
, individuals do that for fun. As a matter of fact, there are some activities Use synonyms
such
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people
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, they learn how to recognize Linking Words
thoughts
of other players along with having an understanding Correct article usage
the thoughts
how
to communicate Change preposition
of how
to
each other during the play. Undeniably, having Change preposition
with
such
skills and experience is vital in all spheres of life to build strong relationships with everyone including family members, colleagues or Linking Words
boss
.
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sport
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sports
people
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work
. In fact, Use synonyms
sport
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one
of the largest Use synonyms
business
in the world where Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
people
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work
hard and be the best to achieve great revenues. Use synonyms
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, it is essential to Linking Words
win
all the competitions to become popular among different Change the verb form
winning
Use synonyms
sport
clubs. Undoubtedly, Change the noun form
sports
people
are forced to be more Use synonyms
competetive
to realise all Correct your spelling
competitive
the
ambitions in their Change the word
their
career
.
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careers
people
who Use synonyms
doing
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do
sport
can have valuable knowledge Use synonyms
how
to Change preposition
of how
work
in a team, while others suppose that Use synonyms
sport
makes Use synonyms
people
more aggressive. I am totally convinced that Use synonyms
although
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sport
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people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite