Today's people's life expectancy is much higher than before. Some believe that older people should continue to work. What extent do yo agree or disagree .
It is
arguing
that nowadays, Wrong verb form
argued
people
live longer than past. Therefore
, older people
should carry on working instead
of young
Add an article
the young
generation
. I totally disagree with the statement that older people
should continue to work
while young
Correct article usage
the young
generation
do
not have a job.
Change the verb form
does
First
of all, older people
can handle any kind of work
in their job as they have a huge experience
, but even if they are able to work
, young
Correct article usage
the young
generation
should take their place because that could be the cause of unemployment and increase
Correct article usage
an increase
of
homeless habitats list. Change preposition
in
For example
, in our modern life
we have a range of Add a comma
,life
people
who have no job because they don't have an experiment. Moreover
, instead
of working, older people
could help young workers
and teach them what they have learned from their experience
.
On the other hand
, most firms and corporations don't want to retire their old workers
as that
old Correct determiner usage
apply
people
have an
authority and respect Remove the article
apply
in
their staff. Change preposition
for
However
, this
is not the solution when this
firms head to problems. Change the determiner
these
For example
, if that
firms have any problem with urgent planning problems they can not do that right on time as their staff is not young enough to deal with it. Change the determiner
those
Also
, if there are not any young workers
, after few
years finding Correct article usage
a few
workers
with experience
can be the real issue.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement that older people
should work
instead
of young
Add an article
the young
generation
as they have an experience
and authority in their working place.Submitted by sherzod5574485 on
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