Some people say that too much attention and many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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wildlife

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receive

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a great deal of attention and

resources

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to preserve. I disagree with the idea that boundless

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and sources in

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protection

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the protection

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of

wildlife

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is given as what

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believe is that not only do the

animals

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and birds suffer from insufficient preserves but

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they need more surveillance and

resources

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in

preserve

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because they play a key role in economic and environment which

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discuss as follow:

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to humans,

wildlife

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have

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some

right

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as accommodation,

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being haunted by humans.

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preserves and facilities are provided for them partially, a large number of

wildlife

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are on the verge of extinction or death.

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, annually a myriad of them are killed by humans for their meat or skin means enough

policy

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of taking

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and

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providing

resources

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are

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not adopted.

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, it is important to protect

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even

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great number of

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costs

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and

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have to be taken. What

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mean to say is that

animals

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are effective for

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in terms of either providing products like eggs,

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and milk

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, or eating weeds. Many Farmers make a living

through

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by

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selling these yields. In the

end

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these sales compound the income of

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the country

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.

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,

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of burning weeds, their crops are

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by animal grazing which is

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beneficial for

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.

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, too much attention and too many

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should be dedicated

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protection

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the protection

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of

animals

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and birds. Overall, while some people claim that too much

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and facilities are given

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protection

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the protection

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of

animals

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and birds, in my

opinion

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wildlife

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are

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still in danger meaning that

care

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and sources

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protection

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the protection

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of them

is

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insufficient and due to being economically and environmentally useful,

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attention and facilities in

protection

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should be more.