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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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At the present , the proportion of
crime
 increasing day by day and the best way to reduce
crime
 is to give longer
prison
 sentences but
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other
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hands
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 believe that there are better alternative ways of reducing
crime
 ,
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 think both views are good for society and people . But in my opinion ,
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 think
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 should give some reasonable sentences for crimes according to their
crime
 level. The only
reasonable
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 for my
view point
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 is those who make small mistakes should receive a suitable
sentence
 compared to receiving a long
prison
sentence
 . Why ? A school of thought holds that the best way to reduce
crime
 is to give longer
prison
 sentences , it may be correct , but it means that all criminals who commit small or big mistakes get the same
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sentence
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 is rather unfair .
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small
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 mistake and they have to receive a longer
prison
sentence
 and they have to stay in
prison
 for the rest of
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 life while they ever make something . In conclusion ,
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 will not say much more ,
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 still stand up for my
view point
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 and
i
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 think that
community
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the community
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 and
goverment
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government
 should have another look at crimes because not all criminals are to blame and there are many aspects that we cannot know about them .
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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