Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

There is no
doupt
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doubt
that our
enviroment
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environment
environmental
health is the most important aspect we should consider about. One of the main issues facing our community is
the
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plastic
products.
This
essay will talk about problems associated with
plastic
products and their
drowbacks
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drawbacks
effect on
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
,
besides
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solutions regarding that issue.
Increasing
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number
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in
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producing
plastic
without a proper handle with it can lead to serious problems,
such
as air pollution,
besides
it
affect
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also
in on the wild and sea creatures.
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can
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because of the false methods, which individuals use to deal with them. To illustrate, some groups can use buring to get rid of their waste,
others
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while others
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can easily throw them in wild or into water sources,
such
as rivers or sea.
As a result
,
this
make
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them eat it, thinking of it as
foor
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food
source, which can easily hurt or even kill them. Keeping on these actions can produce several
drowbacks
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drawbacks
effect
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on the
enviroment
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environment
. Looking to the other side, Many solutions can be afforded to limit these negative consequences and results. In order to do so ,governments
firstly
should put in concern focusing more on the Recycling process in public areas and homes. Without ignoring the individual part, which can
also
participate in cleaning and maintaining open areas and wild from
plastic
products which hardly dissolve.
Eventually
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this
can lead to
minimize
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the pollutions results
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the results of the pollution
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from false
way
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to handle them,
also
saving some lives
be
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collecting them away from
the
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wild animals or sea fish. To sum up ,
although
there are many issues which face the
enviroment
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environment
from
plastic
,
this
can
reduced
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or avoided easily if the community take serious steps
against
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. It is mainly the
government
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role
after all
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to encourage people and provide
to
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them
the
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proper ways to discard.
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